This week for writing we were lucky enough to be writing a poem of... Free Choice! I was so happy to find out we could finally choose what to write about, they did give us some options on which sort of poem we wrote, I choose a riddle poem and this is what I ended up with.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Sunday, September 5, 2021
Writing Riddle Poems!
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ReplyDeleteWell done on your riddle poem! You have done an awesome job writing it and have included some excellent vocabulary and language features. I particularly like the line "muscles rippling in the flow of the sun". Keep up the awesome work!
Miss Henderson